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I said:
   I would like to form exquisite things
   with this pen, grow a dazzling rainbow
   from its nib; I would like to pick a rose
   and make its fragrance sweeter, its petals
   even smoother, redder, make the world so
   much brighter, the sky more wondrous,
   make rust turn to gold and the sun shine
   twice as brightly and invent a blacker
   shade of dark;
   to reveal the beauty of Nothing and to turn
   it into Something
   to weave webs of firm gossamer, capture
   truth in falsehood,   
   to dance with words, fetch them from the
   farthest lands, orchestrate a
   performance of sorts,
   survive even death, with this pen
   to dig in, to stir, to evoke, to awaken, to heal
   make thoughts wilder, feelings more intense,
   tears louder, laughter more radiant,
   cross limits reach out speak hear
   to change, to get away
   sprinkle the world with
   eternal stardust.
   And turn it all into
   something
   beyond
   magnificent.
    
All.
with this pen.
And I smiled, silent.

But then you said:
    If you want to write,
          then
              write.
©2007-2009 ~anemptypage
:iconanemptypage:

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It's been a long time, hasn't it? I welcome myself back to dA with this.

Thank you very much for reading :)

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:iconypres:
Well, you have written, haven't you? :D So much eloquence, such beautiful images...

The whole poem feels very finished somehow, very sure of itself. There is a sense of completion in the last sentence, and that's something very rare to see. Beautiful work. :+fav:
:iconvivinefertari:
...wow.
I could feel everything that I read.
It was beyond imagination.
Welcome back!

--
仕方がない
shikata ga nai
it can't be helped
:iconkasiasdragon:
It's simply amazing. Quietly it weaves a story so as to keep me at the edge of my seat, yet at the same time it could be a lullaby to soothe the beast within me. You've got some massive talent when it comes to writing. I'm still a bit in shock.

--
me: Wooo! I'm gonna get hooked up to a bunch of wires and machines. I'll be the bionic woman!

~THCA If they give you electrolytes you'll be the ionic woman too!
:iconpencilrebel:
:clap:
you could really feel the wanting to DO something here. i think you've verbalized something every writer feels.
:+fav:

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CRAZYAWESOME.

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