I said:
I would like to form exquisite things
with this pen, grow a dazzling rainbow
from its nib; I would like to pick a rose
and make its fragrance sweeter, its petals
even smoother, redder, make the world so
much brighter, the sky more wondrous,
make rust turn to gold and the sun shine
twice as brightly and invent a blacker
shade of dark;
to reveal the beauty of Nothing and to turn
it into Something
to weave webs of firm gossamer, capture
truth in falsehood,
to dance with words, fetch them from the
farthest lands, orchestrate a
performance of sorts,
survive even death, with this pen
to dig in, to stir, to evoke, to awaken, to heal
make thoughts wilder, feelings more intense,
tears louder, laughter more radiant,
cross limits reach out speak hear
to change, to get away
sprinkle the world with
eternal stardust.
And turn it all into
something
beyond
magnificent.
All.
with this pen.
And I smiled, silent.
But then you said:
If you want to write,
then
write.














Comments
The whole poem feels very finished somehow, very sure of itself. There is a sense of completion in the last sentence, and that's something very rare to see. Beautiful work.
I could feel everything that I read.
It was beyond imagination.
Welcome back!
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仕方がない
shikata ga nai
it can't be helped
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me: Wooo! I'm gonna get hooked up to a bunch of wires and machines. I'll be the bionic woman!
~THCA If they give you electrolytes you'll be the ionic woman too!
you could really feel the wanting to DO something here. i think you've verbalized something every writer feels.
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CRAZYAWESOME.
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